Showing posts with label Short Story. Show all posts
Showing posts with label Short Story. Show all posts

Thursday, April 18, 2013

Souldancer Apocrypha: Out of the Flames

Sorry for the lateness of this post. My internet was down most of yesterday. In reparation I offer a side story exclusive to this blog.

            “Is he coming?”

            Sheb’s question evoked a sharp hiss from Quor.

            “I’m sorry,” the younger boy said.

            Reducing his two-handed grip on the upper branch to one, Quor turned to frown at Sheb. “Be less sorry and more quiet,” his elder brother whispered. He ain’t never coming if you scare him off!”

            Hanging his head, the younger boy clutched tighter to the bulbous oilcloth bundle he held.

            “Don’t pout,” Quor said with a note of regret. “I’m just the lookout. You have the best job.”

            Sheb looked past his arboreal perch to the trail far below. The dirt path was remarkably clear for how seldom the villagers used it.

            The younger boy returned his attention to his brother. Quor had resumed his post, scanning the woods in the direction of Vale. His sandy hair caught the red-orange light of sunset that filtered through the canopy. A gust of wind shook the leaves. Though not quite cold, it already lacked summer’s heat.

            Sheb’s focus snapped back to the present moment when he saw Quor’s body tense. “Someone’s coming,” the elder boy said.

            Well trained in what was required of him, Sheb braced himself against the tree trunk and held the bundle over the path. His heart pounded in expectation of a white-robed figure meandering along the trail.

            Minutes passed, and no one appeared. The bag weighed no more than five pounds, but the effort of suspending it over empty space started to take its toll on the boy’s arms. The bundle’s contents shifted as his hands began to shake.

            “Hold steady!” Quor hissed.

            Something flew up and bit the back of Sheb’s leg. Abandoning stealth, the younger boy screamed and pitched forward. He clutched desperately for support as the bag plummeted, painting the trail in a spatter of rotten blackberries. His grasping hands found Quor’s shirt. The effort gained only a moment’s reprieve before both boys toppled from their boughs to land in bushes defiled by fermented pulp.

            “Look what you’ve done!” Quor raged as he struggled to free himself from sticky, pungent shrubbery and his brother’s gangly limbs.

            “I’m sorry,” Sheb wailed. “Something bit me!”

            “The sting of a cast stone is better than you deserve,” a husky voice declared.

            “Who’s there?” Quor asked, his voice trembling.

            “It’s highwaymen,” Sheb yelled. “They’ll slit our throats and dump us in the brush!”

            “You’re already in the brush,” the stranger said. “Stop squirming unless you want to stay there.”

            A heavy, callused hand grabbed Sheb’s arm and yanked him free of the sticky shrub. A moment later he stood beside Quor, covered in musky syrup and leaves. Sheb knew the man towering over them was no highwayman. The children of Vale were warned that troublemakers would be exiled to the deep dark woods with old Janto. Now here he stood in his ragged clothes; his stern eyes framed by a wild wreath of hair and beard.

            “Do you know the trouble you nearly caused?” Janto asked at length.

            “We was just out berry-picking,” Sheb lied.

            “You should learn to tell ripe fruit from rotten,” Janto said. “But I know what you were doing here.”

            Quor suddenly broke his silence. “Please don’t make us live in the woods!” he cried. “We’re sorry. Just let us go home!”

            Janto raised a shaggy eyebrow at the elder boy. “I have troubles enough without a pair of delinquents to look after,” he said, and Sheb’s heart leapt.

            “But neither can I let you return home,” the hermit added.

            The brothers exchanged desolate looks. To their surprise, Janto turned and started down the trail.

            “Come,” he barked. “I know a stream nearby. You can go back to your mother when we’ve improved your smell.”

 

            Almost an hour later, Sheb sat beside Quor on a mossy stone; the hermit’s musty cloak enveloping both of them. Their wet clothes hung from low branches nearby. Janto seated himself on the bed of needles beneath a dying pine. Sheb felt his brother shivering beneath the cloak, and he noticed that the coming night had lent a slight chill to the once balmy air.

            “Pardon me sir,” the younger boy said. “It’s nearly dark. Won’t you light a fire?”

            Janto brooded, stirring the brown needles before him with a twig. At last he said, “No fire tonight. Not with the Journey underway.”

            “He came, then?” Quor asked through chattering teeth. “We was up in that tree since noon and didn’t see nobody.”

            “But you were seen,” the hermit said. “A blind man could have. I met the sojourner and set him on a safer path.”

            “You turned him away?” Quor groaned. “Why’d you let us spend all day up that damned tree?”

            Janto’s silence made the stone seem raucous. After a moment he said, “Nothing must hinder the Journey. If I’ve taught you nothing else today, I pray that seed alone takes root.”

            Sheb leaned closer, causing Quor to jockey for his share of the cloak. “We wasn’t gonna hurt Jemai,” he said. “We just wanted a bit of fun with him.”

            The hermit’s deep brown eyes fixed themselves on the boy so suddenly that Sheb nearly toppled from his seat. Pain and loss were graven on that weathered face, along with a kind of fervor bordering on fear. Then, just as suddenly, he looked away.

            “Neither of you knew the time before the Journey,” Janto said. “That is a blessing. It was not a time of pleasant memory. Years before you swelled your mother’s belly, a handful of us gathered in the Vale. We came from all the corners of the world looking for rest and relief. What we found was hunger and hardship.

            The hermit paused. Taking up his stick again, he resumed scratching in the pine-scented dirt. “I had a younger brother not much more than your age,” he told Quor. “God never game him the natural fear of foolishness that helps most folks survive. He got tired of being hungry and set out east: the first to leave of us who’d come.

            Sheb felt Quor shifting beside him. Now both of them sat on the rock’s edge.

            “The old folks figured he’d come home when he got tired. There was talk of a search when the first day passed, but no one ever went. Finally folk just stopped talking of him—even our mother.”

            “Did he ever come back?” asked Sheb. The shame of his sudden intrusion warmed his face.

            “Aye,” Janto said. “It was me who found him. I shared the others’ fear of the outside, but it was my brother who’d gone missing. So I took to walking the woods; never going much farther than we’re sitting right now.

            “One day at sundown I rounded a bend and there he was: stumbling out of the bush near the fork in the stream. I waded right across to him and was about to embrace him till I saw what had become of his face.”

            The storyteller paused. Sheb held back the question on his lips, but just barely.

            “What happened to him?” Quor asked instead.

            Janto was a moment longer answering. “I almost thought it a trick of the failing light,” the hermit said, pressing the twig into the ground point first. “But I got close enough to make no mistake, and the sight banished all doubt that what folk said about the Great Fire was true. My brother was burnt: not by the sun or even by open flame. There wasn’t a mark on him besides the palm print branded into his face.”

            Quor’s eyes widened. “Demons,” he whispered.

            “Perhaps,” Janto said. “But demons in stories have claws or hooves. I never heard of one with hands dainty as a young maid’s.”

            Sheb’s breath caught in his throat. The night’s chill returned in force.

            “I don’t know how he made it back,” the hermit went on. “The burn had already festered. One of his eyes was a weeping boil, and the other was nearly sealed shut. He was starved and exposed, but somehow he’d found his way. I helped him back to the Vale where he died in the night.”

            This time Sheb needed no help keeping silent. There were no words.

            “The next spring was the first time there was more green than grey,” Janto said. “The Journey’s been made every year since, and it’s never left us wanting.”

            “I’m sorry for your brother,” said Quor.

The hermit grinned, perhaps with pride. “Horth was the first to seek the Fire beyond the mountains. He’s still the only one who’s come back. If it teaches you why we send one soul each year to ransom many, and why we light no fires at summer’s end; then his tale’s worth the telling.”

 

            Sheb didn’t remember falling asleep when he awoke next to Quor early the next morning. The hermit was gone; leaving his cloak and the boys’ dried and folded clothing.

            The walk back to Vale passed in silence. Emotions warred inside his heart: pity for old Janto, gratitude for the blessings gained by his long-dead brother, and shame for nearly desecrating his rite.

            One question kept nagging him, though.

            “Quor,” he finally asked, “why do they send simpletons like Jemai if the Journey’s so important?”

            “It’s an honor, Sheb,” the elder boy said at last. “The only one his kind can hope to get.”

Saturday, October 20, 2012

Beta Geminorum Featured at Drunken Zombie

First a quick update: the most recent Nethereal manuscript revision is fast drawing to a close. I've had some slumps in productivity but should be able to make my end of the month goal if I stay disciplined. When the manuscript is done, I plan to start querying agents.

Of more immediate interest, the fine folks over at Drunken Zombie have graciously featured my first short story "Beta Geminorum" in their 31 Days of Halloween short story series. Zombie inebriate in chief Bryan Wolford has assembled an impressive catalog of shocking tales both classic and contemporary, and it's an honor to be included in his list among luminaries like Ambrose Bierce and H.G. Wells.

Also, be sure to check out Bryan's gripping short story "The Incident at Bowling Ball Tree". It's a macabre coming of age tale in the tradition of Stephen King's "The Body" and is well worth your time.

Monday, April 23, 2012

Story Two Has Been Mostly Published

My second short story "Reign of Terror" is now available. You can get it in print here, in ebook format here, or in pdf here.

Thanks to Title Goes Here: for accepting my work and to the members of this blog for your support.

Thursday, March 22, 2012

A Brief News Item

Earlier this week, I received the contract for my second short story, "Reign of Terror" from Title Goes Here:. I submitted the signed forms yesterday, officially granting them first North American serial rights. The tale is scheduled to see print in their April issue.

Wednesday, January 4, 2012

Beta Geminorum Is Online

My first published short story "Beta Geminorum" has been posted to the Jersey Devil Press website.

http://www.jerseydevilpress.com/?page_id=1962

Saturday, November 26, 2011

Submission to the Devil

After having my first short story "Beta Geminorum" returned unread after a five month wait, I've resubmitted it to Jersey Devil Press.

They're an online magazine that publishes yearly anthologies. They also profess to enjoy weird fiction over there. I hope my work meets their standards.

As always, I'll keep you posted.

Monday, November 7, 2011

Nethereal Third Draft

I finally finished the third draft of my novel yesterday. I ended up trimming the final page count by about a hundred pages, just from tightening up dialogue and reducing unnecessary exposition. It should now be far easier for a reader to forget about the book and get lost in the story.

Finishing this project doesn't mean I'm done. Not remotely. Next on the agenda is revising and resubmitting my first short story. I'll let you know how it goes.

Wednesday, July 13, 2011

Short Story Submission Update

I submitted my short story to Title Goes Here: yesterday. Their submission guidelines page said that I'd receive an automatic reply from their system in short order, which occurred almost instantly. They further advised me that I could expect to hear from an editor when the story went in their pile. The stated response time for the second notice was up to two weeks, so I was pleasantly surprised to get a personalized message from the co-editor in chief later that same day.

The third and final notice I'll receive will of course be the rejection (or failing that, acceptance) letter. The magazine's web site claims that the final word may not come for 120 days. However, considering the target time to actual response ratio I've experienced in my correspondence with them so far, there's reason to hope for a much speedier resolution. I'll keep you in the loop.

Mick over at This Is a Music Thing enlisted my help with the labels on his posts, so I'm off to see what I can do. I'm open to advice from anyone who cares to give their two cents on this subject.

Wednesday, July 6, 2011

Title Goes Here

As promised, I have decided upon the next magazine to submit my story to. This time, the lucky recipient charged with poring over my derivative, pseudo-Lovecraftian scrawl is Title Goes Here.

I'll keep you updated on further developments.

Monday, July 4, 2011

From Bronze to Silver

Merrilee Faber was right when she said that Three-Lobed Burning Eye is prompt. They read and rejected my short story within two days of my submission, which has to be some kind of record. Even better, this time I got a personalized response instead of a form letter. 3LBE's extremely rapid reply has been duly recorded over at Duotrope.

Not only did I receive feedback this time, it was unequivocally positive. The editor said that the story was very well written. It's just not what they're looking for at the moment.

I should be able to start looking for another magazine to submit the story to on Wednesday.

Friday, June 24, 2011

Next Stop: Three-Lobed Burning Eye

After meticulous research--okay, I searched Duotrope, I've decided to resubmit my short story to Three-Lobed Burning Eye. To be honest, the Lovecraft reference put them over the top.

In keeping with Nick's experiment, I have stepped down from publications offering pro pay scales to semi-pro. Since my primary goal is to build a portfolio of published short stories, a few cents less per word is no problem.

According to Duotrope, their acceptance rate is about 2 and a half percent (pretty good odds while still having standards). They publish online irregularly over the year and print a trade anthology every other year.

I've got a little editing to do in order to meet their submission guidelines. After that, we wait 90 days and see...