Souldancer Progress Report 2

Last week I'd reached page 196 in my revisions, at which point I hit a roadblock. After days of deliberation, I finally decided to cut the entire original scene and rewrite those pages from scratch. These rewrites took me back to the beginning of chapter 11.

Today I worked back up to page 196. I'm pretty satisfied with the changes. A couple of plot holes and deus ex machina scenes have been corrected, and the new material provides a smoother transition to later developments.